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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

I love how the familiar language of advertising slowly becomes storytelling. The products almost disappear, leaving the reader inside the world you’ve created. That’s a rare kind of writing. Thank you for sharing it.

May Season Studio's avatar

That’s exactly it. The language doesn’t sell the product, it sells the permission.

@robopulp's avatar

A unique line of soaps!