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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

I love how the familiar language of advertising slowly becomes storytelling. The products almost disappear, leaving the reader inside the world you’ve created. That’s a rare kind of writing. Thank you for sharing it.

May Season Studio's avatar

That’s exactly it. The language doesn’t sell the product, it sells the permission.

Niamh Celeste's avatar

Ah, the soap. I'm assuming the special customers just get the base without the scent...

@robopulp's avatar

A unique line of soaps!